Not too bad.
We'll start with the bad and work our way up. The story was a bit erratic, but I suppose that is to be expected from a first episode when you are trying to establish characters and motives. Also, whether or not it was intentional, the animation certainly needs work. The character designs weren't bad overall, but a little polish would make this a much better submission. The sound however, is great. Everything is crisp, clean and easy to understand. It's one of the driving forces that makes this so enjoyable. Overall, this isn't too bad, and I am looking forward to the second episode. The jokes were decent, the sound and voice acting were superb, you just need to work the kinks out in the animation.
A pretty good effort with a few flaws.
The animation was pretty good, and I do enjoy your voice acting. Reminds me of Home Movies in a way. My only complaint is that the sound routinely pops, and that is a bit harsh to listen to. But it was pretty funny, and it makes me sad that fairly decent submissions such as this one get lost in a sea of flash. Thanks for the heads up on this one.
ur welcome im really glad you like this episode 2 is coming...eventually
Hey not bad for a days work.
Don't know why, but I really enjoyed this. For a days worth of work, it was actually quite good. Pretty good voice snychronization, and characters were decently drawn. I'd like to see what you could come up with had you put a little more time into it.
thanks for the comment if you want to see animations with more length effort and humor check out demon time and jacob s.t.a.b. they're both series I make but yeah this series is just tiny little ideas made for shits and giggles
It's sounds from the internet.
Why would I honestly want to listen to a sound board of sounds I have heard thousands of times elsewhere?
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