Odd to say the least
I thought the story was awful. But, I gave this a passing grade because I do see talent in this, but its not my thing personally. A few things to work on. The voice acting wasnt very good, and as I said the story was just sort of...well retarded. But, this is a decent submission and definitly deserves a spot on newgrounds. You have an interesting style, and I would like to see some of your work outside of this series.